Hi there, my name is Kayden and I am a student in LH09 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like your writing about the emperor's cursed treasure. It made me think of My friends because it is so great. Have you thought about Shortening sentences so it is not so long? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://thskaydeng.blogspot.com
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Kayden and I am a student in LH09 at Gisborne Intermediate School. I really like your writing about the emperor's cursed treasure. It made me think of
ReplyDeleteMy friends because it is so great. Have you thought about Shortening sentences so it is not so long? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://thskaydeng.blogspot.com